A few things:
You can get raw c sync directly off of the PCE/TG16 graphics chip, so a sync separator is not necessary needed.
Some SCART TV's/monitors actually need full composite video as sync instead of raw c sync, so you may want to consider a selector switch if you might ever run into this. However, if do you find something requiring composite, you can try a 1.2k resistor on the raw sync line to knock it down to .3Vpp as it would expect to find in composite.
For a few more dollars you can use an EL4583 to get real separate H and V sync instead of C and V. Although, this is only needed if you have a picky piece of equipment, as C and V sometimes works fine for RGBHV (VGA). The EL4583 isn't much more difficult to use though; keep in mind that the video filter is optional, and not needed for clean sources.
Using a pot in place of the rset resistor (680k resistor) will give you a good amount of horizontal position adjustment. This is useful, as these old systems use different resolutions that can be all over the place. This works with either the LM1881 or EL4583.