Chapter 6 is 50% done.
Thanks to elmer's spectacular hacking work, I was able to use an easy toolchain and a fully working inserter to play-test-edit the prologue chapter for a stupid amount of time today. All kinds of little problems related to my end cropped up. There were typos, formatting errors, a few contextual mistakes, and lots of lines that just plain didn't work well and needed tweaking. I don't know how many lines I edited, but it was several dozen at least, I'm sure.
I have a workflow down a little bit, and I'm pretty sure I made fewer dumb mistakes as I went into later chapters, but this editing process will be very time consuming nonetheless. I'll probably have to spend up to 10 hours on each chapter for one really good play-test-edit, and I'll probably want to do up to three of those for each of the twelve chapters before we're done.
This prologue chapter works a whole lot better now, but it doesn't sing yet. I want to get it there.